ext_34049 ([identity profile] sorcerygenius.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] xmenfirstkink 2012-02-09 03:53 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Oh shit.

You know, I had totally thought of the fact that Charles would be part of Shaw's "people to kill" group, but like Erik, I too neglected to connect it to the fact that he'll die right away if Shaw pulls off this spell. I think because the story had gotten me so focused on the students rather than the teachers themselves - which was clearly also the case for Erik (that and his mind not syncing with the idea of Charles dying).

So, basically...oh shit.

P.S. I'm also really impressed that you're a new-to-lj author. You've done such an incredible job writing this story, I was expecting you to be one of the biggest writers on the kink meme!

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