http://starkmodistries.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] starkmodistries.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] xmenfirstkink2011-12-18 05:18 pm
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round 3 overflow post

Round 3 Overflow Post


This post is for Round 3 fills only. We ask that when a round hits 8500 comments, fillers begin moving their fills to this post.

Format:
SUBJECT LINE -- Round #, short description of fic (ex: "Alex/Hank, lab partners")
--- Link to the prompt
--- Text of the prompt

--- Link to the fill
OR
--- Entire text of the fill

EXAMPLE:
Prompt: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=1038472#t2038174

Charles/Erik -- Charles is a bakery owner whose most frequent customer is Erik.

Fill: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=0139482#t4502942

Charles started off the morning the same way he always did...

FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-14 06:19 am (UTC)(link)
"It was already here. Technically."

"Yes, and Summers's job is toast, never fear. Oh my god. You actually -- you actually expect me to shoot at you. Right here. You really have no idea..." Charles kept his grip on the gun secure, though his skin wanted to flinch away from it.

Erik's grin had faded. "Come on now, Charles, don't act like it's going to bite you. It's just an object."

"Yes. Yes, that is exactly the point, it is just an object and it only does what a gun is supposed to do."

"Naturally," Erik said warily. "And I'm not aiming it at any of the students, Charles, do you think I'm an idiot?"

"Augh, who am I talking to, you're from a culture that hands out wands capable of lethal spells at the age of eleven, you simply don't understand -- Erik, to kill someone with magic requires intent, all the lethal spells are powered by your own determination to kill this person, you can't do it on accident. Right? You following me? That's why it's perfectly safe to throw the words 'Avada Kedavra!' around right and left, it's not going to do a thing unless you mean it, right? Guns are not like that."

Erik reached to take the gun back, and Charles tightened his grip on it -- no, he couldn't let Erik carry this around, so devoid of the wariness Muggles instinctively treated guns with, what if a child got hold of it, some pureblood child who didn't even know what it was --

"Erik, a bullet won't care if you meant to fire it or not, it fires anyway," he said, and Erik was trying to pry it from his hand now, Charles pulled it closer, and oh struggling over a gun was not not not a wise thing, "and you could kill someone, Erik, you could hurt yourself or me or one of the children without ever meaning to--"

"Charles, you're pointing it at yourself, even I know better than that!"

"I'm not," though he knew it might look that way, and Erik's hands were panicky now, scrabbling --

"Stop it, stop it, just be still!" Charles forced himself to do likewise, and they stood there, rather more tangled together than he'd realized because he was half-turned away and Erik had tried to pull him back. Neither of them was breathing evenly and the gun was cold against Charles's stomach. "Erik," he said, very calmly, when he could, "I'm not giving this back to you, because you don't know how to handle it, and I can't be sure you'd give it the proper respect. I'm going to unload it, disassemble it if I can, and hide it in my room until I can decide what to do about it and you and Alex bloody Summers. That is what's going to happen. Now let me go."

Erik let his arms drop, slowly, but didn't step back. "Charles," he said, breath against Charles's hair, "I wouldn't let anything happen. I would never let you be hurt."

Charles sighed, resting his head against Erik's collar. The letter in his pocket crinkled at the movement. "I know you wouldn't, my friend. I know."

***

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] item.livejournal.com 2012-01-14 07:38 am (UTC)(link)
vggrgjhdwuuygbjjkvrf all the feels hhhhhh I love this fic so muhuhuhuccccch

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] sparkysparky.livejournal.com 2012-01-14 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2012-01-14 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! This was a wonderful update. So much happening here. I actually yelled when Charles was interrupted in his meditation. It's a very interesting turn you have taken with the whole Divination thing. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. Already waiting for the next update.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-17 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you like the Divination thing -- I felt like there had to be a way to make the subject actually relevant and useful to the non-Gifted, and that Charles would be the one to find it.

Also, I love your icon. That is the most perfect fic-comment icon ever.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-14 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't wait for Charles to read the letter. And, *eyes "30ish"* sounds good!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-17 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not promising thirty, we are definitely coming up on the end sequence and if it's shorter, it's shorter, but I know myself and how my stories tend to spiral out of control in terms of length, so...

Charles and this letter. He's still trying to come to terms with its existence before he can even think about actually reading it. I'm as eager for him to open it as you are! I promise, it will happen!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] sorcerygenius.livejournal.com 2012-01-15 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
I just read the whole story up to here, and it is absolutely amazing!

Charles, read the letter! And tell Erik about the wand! And keep that gun away from him! But do have long talks about feelings with him that lead to lots of making out and also hot lovin'!

Erik, continue on your path of becoming less of a moron! And don't get killed by Shaw! And don't get consumed by hatred, either! There's Charles to love and make out with!

Shaw? Die die die die die die die! Or be imprisoned in Azkaban forever and ever and ever! You bastard.

I am really excited for the next part of this.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-17 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Your comment is made of truth and beauty. It should be cross-stitched onto a silver cloth with golden thread and framed in a museum.

That is all.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] sorcerygenius.livejournal.com 2012-01-24 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks! I'd stitch it myself but I don't have any silver cloth.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] tzzzz.livejournal.com 2012-01-15 07:55 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! So happy to see more of this.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

[identity profile] furius.livejournal.com 2012-01-16 09:52 am (UTC)(link)
Kudos to everything. Seriously, this fic of reviving nostalgic true romance for Charles/Erik is also reviving my happy memories of reading HP for the first time...

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-17 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
Mine, too, actually! The process of writing this has made me excited about the HP universe all over again. I'm very happy to hear it's having a similar effect for others!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (18h/30ish)

(Anonymous) 2012-01-16 11:36 am (UTC)(link)
HOW DID CHARLES NOT DIE OF CURIOSITY??? READ THE BLOODY LETTER, CHARLES!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S IN IT!!!