http://starkmodistries.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] starkmodistries.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] xmenfirstkink2011-12-18 05:18 pm
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round 3 overflow post

Round 3 Overflow Post


This post is for Round 3 fills only. We ask that when a round hits 8500 comments, fillers begin moving their fills to this post.

Format:
SUBJECT LINE -- Round #, short description of fic (ex: "Alex/Hank, lab partners")
--- Link to the prompt
--- Text of the prompt

--- Link to the fill
OR
--- Entire text of the fill

EXAMPLE:
Prompt: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=1038472#t2038174

Charles/Erik -- Charles is a bakery owner whose most frequent customer is Erik.

Fill: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=0139482#t4502942

Charles started off the morning the same way he always did...

Re: FILL: Everyday Love in Stockholm 131/?

[identity profile] nekosmuse.livejournal.com 2012-01-27 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
First, I need to thank you for spoiling me, because it makes reading this, not easier, but like I have a better handle on it. You know? It no longer feels like I'm driving in the pitch dark with a steep cliff somewhere up ahead that I just know I'll eventually drive off. It even made pregnant Raven easier to bear (though that did trigger me a bit, though not as bad as before--and wtf is wrong with me that pregnant women trigger me I do not know). What I really liked in this update was your Erik consistency. I like how you showed us this human side (through memories of his parents, the photographs) but then immediately reminded us that he was Magneto (by having him express outrage--however subtextually--at there being no pictures of Raven in her true form). You can see how Charles would fall for the human Erik but by leery of the mutant Magneto. It sort of almost makes Charles' Stockholm syndrome less distressing (though their sexual relationship still makes me cringe). You also did a very good job making Erik sympathetic in this chapter, despite how deplorable his actions are. That last scene was pretty heart breaking.

And omg, I wrote a review that didn't involve triggered Neko freaking out! (I actually read the chapter this morning, freaked out, and then came back to do the review with a level head, which I think will be my routine from now on, that way you don't have to deal with my insanity, only my insight. That work?)

Re: FILL: Everyday Love in Stockholm 131/?

[identity profile] tahariel.livejournal.com 2012-01-28 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad it helped - I want you to be able to enjoy reading it, even if you still find some bits hard. And there's nothing wrong with you for being triggered. God knows we all have things which upset us. For instance, there is no way I'm going to see George Clooney in The Descendants, even though I have this sort of morbid fascination with going to see it, because my Mum died suddenly and left my Dad with two teenage daughters, and I can already tell that's going to be like shooting me after stuffing me in a barrel. So :)

I'm really pleased you liked it, anyway, and thank you so much - your feedback means a lot :) I hope you continue to enjoy it (pending all the things that make you upset with Erik, of course!)