http://starkmodistries.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] starkmodistries.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] xmenfirstkink2011-12-18 05:18 pm
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round 3 overflow post

Round 3 Overflow Post


This post is for Round 3 fills only. We ask that when a round hits 8500 comments, fillers begin moving their fills to this post.

Format:
SUBJECT LINE -- Round #, short description of fic (ex: "Alex/Hank, lab partners")
--- Link to the prompt
--- Text of the prompt

--- Link to the fill
OR
--- Entire text of the fill

EXAMPLE:
Prompt: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=1038472#t2038174

Charles/Erik -- Charles is a bakery owner whose most frequent customer is Erik.

Fill: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=0139482#t4502942

Charles started off the morning the same way he always did...

Re: FILL: Everyday Love in Stockholm 161/?

[identity profile] tahariel.livejournal.com 2012-02-27 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
This review doesn't suck, thank you for it bb, because I really needed something like this. I did struggle a little bit with my feelings about this chapter, so to hear you like it helps a lot :)

I was talking about the fic with a friend recently and the conclusion I came to was that it's really about the shades of grey here, so that you can feel pity for Charles while utterly understanding why Erik has to do what he does. And that's why it's hard (and hard to write!)

Erik is trying so hard, but he just doesn't really know how not to break things, because he's never had to try before. So as little as he wants to, he's hamhanded about it.

Hold on with me, my darling, and soon, soon... :D