http://starkmodistries.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] starkmodistries.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] xmenfirstkink2011-12-18 05:18 pm
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round 3 overflow post

Round 3 Overflow Post


This post is for Round 3 fills only. We ask that when a round hits 8500 comments, fillers begin moving their fills to this post.

Format:
SUBJECT LINE -- Round #, short description of fic (ex: "Alex/Hank, lab partners")
--- Link to the prompt
--- Text of the prompt

--- Link to the fill
OR
--- Entire text of the fill

EXAMPLE:
Prompt: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=1038472#t2038174

Charles/Erik -- Charles is a bakery owner whose most frequent customer is Erik.

Fill: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=0139482#t4502942

Charles started off the morning the same way he always did...

Re: FILL: Everyday Love in Stockholm 177/?

[identity profile] tahariel.livejournal.com 2012-03-12 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
The tone was the biggest challenge this week, seriously. Managing that four year gap without losing the dynamic that had already built was - tricky. So I'm really glad you've found that it works for you - that's all you can ask for as a writer when you've struggled over something as hard as I did this week!

The problem they really face now is that Erik had been relaxing, and moving toward a more centralised point of view, only to have all of his worst fears proven true, and causing him to react in the only way he knows how. He's backtrodden all of the progress he's made - and frankly, I can't blame him. I know I'm biased in his favour, but it's no wonder he's gunshy when he's been shot so many times before.

And yet, he knows this about himself enough to wish he could give Charles the one thing he wants most, but cannot bring himself to let Charles have, because if he lost him Erik would have lost everything and everyone. He's a lost soul, really, looking for a way to have everything in a world of closed doors.