Oh man, I seriously hope someone picks up your invitation to write more of this, as I would love to see Erik finally getting a fucking clue. You are treating him just like Shaw did, Erik.
Mystique is very interesting here -- upset on her brother's behalf, protective of him, but also missing a few vital pieces of perspective due to the fact that she is herself an alpha and not an omega.
I LOVED Charles conversation with the other omega. It really highlighted some wretched aspects of this world.
Also, and it wasn't clear in the first story, but they are on Genosha? As in, the country that Erik rules and makes the laws for. As in, he's the one responsible for the law that says omegas are the property of their alphas. BRRRR.
Other readers have called for a happy ending, with a Charles and Erik reconcilliation, but I say FUCK THAT. This Erik doesn't deserve Charles. I just want Charles to find sanctuary elsewhere -- maybe on Muir Island -- and raise his kid and put his life back together.
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Re: En Passant 7/7 (Charles/Erik, Charles/Shaw, omegaverse AU, warning: dubcon)
Date: 2012-01-31 11:52 pm (UTC)Mystique is very interesting here -- upset on her brother's behalf, protective of him, but also missing a few vital pieces of perspective due to the fact that she is herself an alpha and not an omega.
I LOVED Charles conversation with the other omega. It really highlighted some wretched aspects of this world.
Also, and it wasn't clear in the first story, but they are on Genosha? As in, the country that Erik rules and makes the laws for. As in, he's the one responsible for the law that says omegas are the property of their alphas. BRRRR.
Other readers have called for a happy ending, with a Charles and Erik reconcilliation, but I say FUCK THAT. This Erik doesn't deserve Charles. I just want Charles to find sanctuary elsewhere -- maybe on Muir Island -- and raise his kid and put his life back together.