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Round 3 Overflow Post


This post is for Round 3 fills only. We ask that when a round hits 8500 comments, fillers begin moving their fills to this post.

Format:
SUBJECT LINE -- Round #, short description of fic (ex: "Alex/Hank, lab partners")
--- Link to the prompt
--- Text of the prompt

--- Link to the fill
OR
--- Entire text of the fill

EXAMPLE:
Prompt: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=1038472#t2038174

Charles/Erik -- Charles is a bakery owner whose most frequent customer is Erik.

Fill: http://xmen-firstkink.livejournal.com/6437.html?thread=0139482#t4502942

Charles started off the morning the same way he always did...

FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-08 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
Professor Shaw opened his door without knocking. "Yes, Erik? What is this very urgent matter I had to be disturbed for?"

Erik pulled himself upright with a strangled gasp, cleared his throat while trying to clear his mind. "I thought you should know, sir, that it seems the Floo Network has gone down. I was in the middle of a conversation and the connection simply vanished. I tried it from another fireplace with the same result. Do you know what could cause that to happen?"

Shaw cocked his head, a tiny smile quirking his mouth. "So that was you, was it? I don't know whether to be more disappointed or impressed."

"Beg your pardon, sir?" Erik's pulse was suddenly very loud in his ears. He began inching one hand toward his wand.

"I thought surely it was Xavier. I even stopped by his classroom and office on the way here, but there's no sign of the boy. I wonder if he made a run for it? It won't do him any good." Shaw abruptly started, reached into his pocket – Erik tensed, half-drawing his wand – but Shaw only pulled out a glow-ball. Not the usual cool green, but flashing red.

"Aha," Shaw said with alarming satisfaction. "How very clever. Unfortunately for you and Xavier, my dear Erik, I had magical motion alarms installed in my quarters after a... strange incident a few days ago. I wonder if that was you as well? Ah, well, we can discuss it later."

Erik's wand was already half-drawn, but Shaw was still faster.

***

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-08 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh shit. Just caught up with this like, after weeks of not being around, and here we have a huge-ass cliffhanger. I'll be around, biting my nails.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
Ha ha, yeah, great time for the cliffhanger. I promise, all will be resolved soon!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-08 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smackbad.livejournal.com
This isn't just damn good Cherik fic, it's damn good Potterverse fic. All the high-fives/internets/tonguelicks to you.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
Thank you!! I will gladly accept the high-fives and internets but I have mixed feelings about the tonguelicks.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-08 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tahariel.livejournal.com
*flailing*

*flailing some more*

Oh, damn, the suspense is going to kill me! You're very good at that, you know, I can't even hate you for it!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
lol It's good to know that you don't hate me. I don't hate you too!!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-08 10:51 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
You've written this so well, with so much going on, that I didn't remember Charles would die either! That's excellent plotting and diversion.

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
*bows, hand over heart*

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-09 03:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naihma mae elmidor casicas (from livejournal.com)
oh... the SUSPENSE!! I CAN'T HANDLE IT! must stop pressing F5.
and yes, Erik, the Floo Network is not bloody Microsoft! :P

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
I love to have Charles make weird Muggle references and not even notice whether Erik understands them or not. Sorry about the cliffhanger! I'm working on resolving it!!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-09 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorcerygenius.livejournal.com
Oh shit.

You know, I had totally thought of the fact that Charles would be part of Shaw's "people to kill" group, but like Erik, I too neglected to connect it to the fact that he'll die right away if Shaw pulls off this spell. I think because the story had gotten me so focused on the students rather than the teachers themselves - which was clearly also the case for Erik (that and his mind not syncing with the idea of Charles dying).

So, basically...oh shit.

P.S. I'm also really impressed that you're a new-to-lj author. You've done such an incredible job writing this story, I was expecting you to be one of the biggest writers on the kink meme!
Edited Date: 2012-02-09 03:53 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
I've done a bit of kinkmeme stuff -- it's all on AO3. It's only with XMFC that I've really gotten into fanfic much (and my original stories are definitely suffering from the amount of time I'm putting into this instead, lol). But I'm just enjoying it so much!!!

Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-11 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorcerygenius.livejournal.com
Hooray! I will happily enable you in this addiction.
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Re: FILL: The Better Men (22c/30ish)

Date: 2012-02-10 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtletotem.livejournal.com
*offers box of tissues she carries about for just such an emergency*

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